For most of you wanting to take a peak into The Path of a Guardian, here is the first two chapters of my current draft! Feel free to leave me your feedback. I’m always open to talking to you about it as well. Wish it formatted better. Enjoy! (All works copyrighted)

A lost soul can stay hidden. With a fall, it may stumble into truth. Truth is what most of us seek, but few really find. Welcome to Treahan, more specifically the Southland of the center continent called Ceisoty.

The shadow in the darkness sat up instantly in his grimy bed. “Nightmares,” his mind thought out loud. Shafts of light crept through the rough fabric blocking the windows. Dreams of his childhood had returned after lying dormant for years. Stuffy dust filled his nostrils. Choked him. He knew he had to escape the confines of the gloomy place… eventually.

He rushed out of his muddy cabin and took in a breath of fresh mountain air. A sturdy man, no more than twenty. His matted blond hair waved in the wind as it blew through the trees in the wild forest. He scratched his dirty beard and dropped to the ground. His scarred physique pumped out pushups on the dew covered grass. The moisture caressed his nostrils and the aroma of the soil comforted him. Pale blue eyes turned from lost and distant to sharp and determined. Standing, he bent his torso and stretched his legs, feeling his tendons expand like iron cords. He broke into a sprint along the beaten dirt road through the forest. His breathing, the wind in the pines, and his bare feet tapping the land were the only sounds heard as he ran miles to return to his home an hour later.

The young man slowed to a stop outside the small cabin and looked up at the complex tree in front of him. Massive, with many ropes and obstacles tied to the winding limbs. He rubbed his unkempt whiskers, jumped up, and grabbed the thick vine made rope. Wrapping his legs, he hoisted himself upwards. His muscles tightened with every pull. His breath remained steady. Sweat beaded his forehead.

He came to a pulley and jumped up on a platform, pulling himself upwards using the mechanized device. His hands grasped a rope ladder and climbed to the summit of the branches. Wrapping his arms tightly around the limb, he swung to the top platform. Careful legs stood up on the piece of wood. The leaves brushed aside to reveal the blue sky resting over the mountainous terrain. His mind eased, seeing the familiar humps and breaks in the brush for the sparkling lakes. His watchful stare narrowed at smoke rising from a certain area of the mountain pass. Beautiful, he thought. But he knew they were coming.

The man sunk below the river of leaves, coming back to the skeleton of the forest. He grabbed the rope next to him and released a lever. His adrenaline rushed as his body plummeted downward to stop a short distance above the ground. Letting go, he fell to the dirt and the rope returned systematically to its former position.

He began to walk around his cabin.

A fierce brown cougar with white tusks wandered over to the side of his home and sniffed into one of the windows.

The young man winced and backtracked slowly to pick up a sharpened stick he had tilted against his log house. He silently crept toward his luck, but the beast sensed his presence. “C’mon saber tooth. You’re good eating,” the man whispered as it growled and lifted its shoulders. Black circles of tire shrouded his vision from the workout. The makeshift spear trembled in his weary fingers.

The mighty cougar lunged forward with a roar.

“Frock,” he cursed as he dug the back end of the stick into the ground.

The jungle cat snarled as it impaled itself. The heavy paws slumped over the man’s shoulders. Its last breath in his face made him nauseous.

He heaved the carcass off his body and went to gut and clean his prey. A knife stripped the flesh bare and sliced the body into steaks. He packed away the meat in barrels of salt and hung the skins up to dry, then walked down to the waterfall on the side of his mountain. It was his, as far as he was concerned. After bathing in the cold water, he pulled his coarse shirt over a blue tattoo of a P in the center of his back. He stepped into his black shorts and mentioned to himself, “Let’s go Leor. Time is running thin.” Leor jogged back to his outdoor cabin to retrieve his equipment.

Chapter 1- Survivor

Leor walked in the door of his humble cabin and covered himself in a brown robe. Concealing his head with the hood, he breathed a sigh of lulled boredom. Wooden walls mixed with mud and stick made it a dingy place. Piles of debris filled the cramped corners. He picked up one of the well read books in a stack.

“The Distant Land Adventures,” he remarked and chucked it away, “Despite this existence, there will be none for me to speak of.” His voice comforted him in the lonely place. He collapsed into a splintery chair for a moment. The only reason he worked out so hard was to still feel alive. His muscles would believe it tomorrow.

A cracked mirror in the corner reflected a worn sheath and a bright hilt lying in front of it. The katana looked to be the only thing of care among the heap. He approached it with reverence. One finger traced the black binding over the handle. His steady hands grasped his sword. “Alright old friend, let’s go out and create some more mischief.” The katana gleamed as he unsheathed it and wiped the light blue blade with the oily rag on his counter. His blue eyes read the one-sided blade inscription. The Path of Protection. He slid it back into the silver sheath and attached it to his belt with twine.

Leor tied up his worn boots and grabbed an orange fruit to eat along the way. The peels fell lightly on the ground as the robed survivor walked down the path to reveal a bigger dirt road. Then he crawled into the nearby brush overlooking a small hill. There he waited, as he waited every day. The smoke in the pass gave away his visitors arrival. Sometimes he would bring a book. Other moments he would spend whittling sticks or equally pointless endeavors. Today he just thought. Pondered. Questioned his life. These days were an uncommon threat to his routine.

The sun rose higher and a black wagon rolled over the hill connected to two mysteriously white and black striped horses. Stranger than usual, thought Leor. An older man with a long gray ponytail and a gray mustache held the reins. The strange man adjusted his black waist coat and stretched his crimson pants like he had been travelling awhile. These were always the easiest prey. The ones who just wanted to get on through the mountains.

Leor drifted out onto the path like a ghoul, his robe blowing in the wind as he drew his blue sword and pointed at the man on the cart. The reins pulled back and the horses slowed to a stop, but the man smirked, showing no signs of worry. He hoped his countenance would change. “Pay your toll and you may pass. Do not give me trouble, instead food and supplies. Now act and choose, but be ready if you dare, to face the consequences, your fare?”

The old man sputtered with laughter. He tried to stifle it as he wiped at his stiff mustache. “Aren’t you a bit late for the festival? It happened at Yodor about a month ago. You do know that is back down the way I came. So why don’t you pack your things and start, you might be able to make it for the next one!” he replied in a sinewy voice.

Leor frowned under his hood, not in the mood for a fight. “Sir, why do you challenge me? This is my mountain pass. You must pay to go through! I demand supplies or I will retaliate.”

The man’s quizzical face turned grave, he jumped out of his seat and walked side to side on the dirt path, keeping a curious eye on Leor. He looked done studying the hooded thief and stretched his lanky legs nearer.

Leor grew rarely nervous.

The surprisingly tall man looked through the hood. An orange tinge flashed in his faded brown eyes. His pointy mustache twitched. He raised his right hand. Just as Leor’s blue blade was going to strike out, he snapped his fingers. A flash of purple light shone into the hooded face.

Everything became black. Leor felt himself falling, but never hitting the ground. His dreams had returned to him. Memories floated gently into his consciousness. He was walking down a flight of steps and gazing at a stadium full of people that looked down at him in the heavy night. Now only a small boy, his nervousness grew with the oncoming ceremony. The fire in the middle of an arena lit his anxious face as he approached the line of red, blue, and yellow painted chieftains and the crowd got silent. His bare chest flinched as he neared the blaze.

A proud announcer stood. “Tonight, a new Head Guardian will be chosen. The old leader will step down to instruct the newest addition to the righteous legacy of the Guardian Tribe.”

The Head Guardian wore a gold vest, red leather pants, and a helmet resembling a blue flame crowning his head. He approached the childish Leor with a warm smile. “Don’t worry, this is only the beginning.” His careful hand pulled a shining metal rod out of the fire and burnt it into the boy’s back.

The fair haired minor winced as the brand released.

The Head Guardian’s hand lit up with blue light as he sealed the burning wound. His face held so much respect in the aged lines of wisdom. “Let the Spirit lighten your path,” he proclaimed.

The shape of a P glowed brightly in Leor’s back. A feeling of great pride crept over his spine. The tingling of power surged through his body and his hands poured out light. The Guardian people cheered and the celebration commenced. A few weeks passed in loving adoration for him, but in the dream they seemed like a fleeting second. A dark shroud of violence overtook his village.

Leor found himself surrounded by fire. The same crowd that was in the stadium ran for their lives. Arrows flew over their heads. He rushed through the smoke filled village and approached the flame covered home of his mentor, the last Head Guardian. To his horror, the walls and roof sunk in.

His mentor broke out of the rubble and crawled towards the frightened child with an indigo glowing sword in hand. “Let the Spirit guide you! Protect them!” The words came out like thunder to Leor. Then he sunk and fell into the darkness of the night terror.

He grabbed the katana and ran until he could feel the heat burn his face. Darkness overwhelmed his consciousness. Small fires ripped through his mind, lighting winged figures. Black bird-like beings cawed and flew above the flames of the village. The dream quickly expanded into a burning inferno.

“Leave me be! I don’t want to bother anyone!” Leor shouted out at the flitting shadows.

An iron clad figure walked slowly out of the raging flames. “That isn’t your choice, is it boy? Your existence, the existence of your people, threatens the peace I can show the world.”

Leor shirked away. “Who are you?”

The iron figure stepped forward steadily. “You can’t kill my dream of peace. You can’t kill me. You’re already dead,” he proclaimed as if he didn’t hear the child.

Leor ran forward in anger. “No, I’m very much alive!”

The pair exploded in blue light. And his dream shook him awake.

The sweaty Leor flinched and his head throbbed as he gazed at the dark forest of night. A fire burned in front of his cabin. His heart pounded his chest and sweat soaked his body. He noticed the strange old man from earlier sitting next to him. The green fireflies glowed uncommonly bright as they flew around the area. They gave a faint light to the trees and randomly lit up the stranger’s black cart like flickering candles. The striped horses chewed on something odd. Their eyes seemed to glimmer with the fire as they watched him stir out of sleep. His mind was jarred.

The man roasted Leor’s kill from earlier. His lanky body turned around and saw the road thief had awoken. “I’m sorry,” the older gentleman said, “I thought it rude to break into your supplies without your permission, but saber tooth meat is delicious.” His strong hands ripped off a piece of the bloody meat, the threads snapped as he pulled it apart. He swallowed it raw.

Leor felt nauseous and tried to move. His hands and feet were tied. He knew he had to play nice and glanced up at the man, clearing his scratchy throat in preparation. “Ok, maybe we stepped off on the wrong foot. I just want to mind my own business. You can pass. You can take the meat if you wish, but please untie me first.”

The bizarre man chuckled, straightening his mustache. “Well now, that is a little change from earlier, Mr. Forest Tax-Collector. If I didn’t know better, I’d say you have a split personality disorder.”

Leor contorted his face. He had never heard such a weird expression.

The fire crackled, popped, and the man lifted the cougar meat off it. Raising one eyebrow, he glanced down at his captor. “I assume you are hungry? I thought you might like yours cooked. For me, it’s too tough that way. I can’t taste the vivacity of its former life.”

Leor cringed as a sour taste hit the back of his throat. Annoyance mixed with wonder asked why he didn’t just leave him on the road. “Sure, but I don’t und-”

“You don’t understand why I have stayed here with you. It is simple really. I thought you might entertain me.” The man pulled the glowing purple cords on Leor’s hands and feet, slipping them off with ease. He stuffed them into a sack on his left. He took the steaming meat, placing it on the table he set up in front of Leor.

Leor got up, rubbing his wrists, and sat down on the ground next to the old man. “By the way, my name is Leor and thank you for making dinner.” He questioned if these were manners. Four years was a long time to not have a real conversation.

His teeth spread like a perfectly built white wall. “It is your food, and you do look puzzled! I won’t confuse you further.” He stood up and bowed deeply, looking up as if he did not want to remove his eyes. “My name is Reficule, a mercenary that seeks paid jobs! My specialty lies in the most difficult of tasks and seeking things beyond the supernatural. Things that make the darkness stir and things only your dreams can see.”

Leor stared wide eyed, completely bemused of Reficule. He reached down and took the steaming meat, smelling it in suspicion. The aroma massaged his nostrils with hints of smoke and barbeque. He tossed it into the fire. It all smelled too good for comfort.

The odd man continued speaking with power in every syllable. “I have come to the conclusion you are one who needs someone like me. You sit here alone on this deserted mountain. In the mornings you promptly take innocent traveler’s cargo from them. Do you enjoy this sad agenda of thievery?”

Leor looked slightly annoyed in thought. Who did this Reficule think he was? Classifying his life with such ease. He wanted to challenge his point, but the realization of his missing sword pushed him toward a steady approach. “I am comfortable here and don’t want to be bothered. I appreciate the concern, but I’ll be fine.” Then he started making his way to the cabin door. Suddenly, the brand on his back lit up in a fiery pain. The sting shot through his bones.

Leor grabbed over his shoulder, wincing, and turned to face Reficule.

His beaming smile coolly rested. “What happened? Your body disagreeing with you? I am here to offer you a proposition. I need a bodyguard to accompany me to the next town, have you heard of Bandit’s Bay? It is a ring of pirates and thieves. What’s more is you could find a life for yourself there instead of hanging around here, waiting for people to show up! So how about it young lad, are you up for the challenge? You will be rewarded for your efforts of course.”

Leor weighed the decision as he looked deeper into the pines and sat back down on a nearby log. Whatever survival required of him, he did. His mantra bended though. The rejection of that belief on a wild choice didn’t suit him. But how long had it been since he made a truly wild choice? His thoughts from that morning returned. His dream from that day haunted him.

Reficule pulled out a bamboo flute and started to play a cryptic tune as the green fireflies became even more numerous than before. His song reached the trees and the wind picked up, blowing back and forth, rustling the leaves and making the branches creak. The relaxing air moved with the melody and rejuvenated Leor’s tired body. He stopped playing and looked at Leor, glaring into the fire embers as if in a trance. “I will let you sleep on it my good man. If you agree, we shall leave first thing in the morning! Good night.” He got up, chucked the cougar meat into the fire and tapped on the table. It quickly folded into a nice square shaped object no bigger than a book. He swiped it up and walked into his wagon cart, immediately lighting upon his entry.

Leor ran grubby fingers through his greasy hair. He looked around as the green fireflies lit up periodically and pondered the decision to nature’s light show. His life would consist of hunting, fishing, and growing old on the lowly mountain. No guidance had ever reared its head, nowhere for him to begin. He was comfortable up there though. The circular thoughts consumed him until he eventually got up. The fire blew out as if waiting for him.

Leor noticed his katana, with the sheath removed, leaning against his cabin. The inscription, The Path of Protection, shone in the night. He grabbed the sword and walked inside. His tired body collapsed into bed and drifted off to sleep, the unchanging memories of his past ripped into his mind again. He stood among the leaders of his people. The bestowed teachings of the Guardians echoed through his dreams. “Protect the empire, protect your values, and protect the way of the Guardian Tribe!” The Head Guardian’s face appeared from the dream’s darkness, looking at Leor once more. His mouth formed the powerful words again. “Protect them!”

“I’m sorry!” Leor sat upwards, definitely awoken. But he looked around, not in his bed. The place shook around him. He could hear the clopping of hoofs and the rolling sound of wagon wheels on dirt. “You have got to be kidding me!” Surrounded by many different contraptions and dark looking gadgets, he struggled up to the front of the wagon. His panicked eyes peered out to a road far from his lonely mountain. The black and white lined horses ran at full speed in the intense sunshine.

“Good morning Leor, I thought we’d get an early start!” Reficule’s wide grin looked down on him from the driver’s seat. He cracked the reins with glee.

Leor’s expression of bewilderment turned to frustration fast. “What do you mean an early start? I didn’t even give you my answer, I want to go back! This is ridiculous…”

The old man gave the annoying laugh Leor despised. “Oh, who are you kidding? Of course you were going to say yes! I have gathered some of your ragged clothing and that sharp, pointy object and put them in a bag in the back labeled with an L. Come up here and get comfortable. We have an all day ride if we want to make it to Bonsai Valley before nightfall.”

“You’re out of your mind! It is I not WE. There is no WE!” Leor shouted and hurried back in the wagon. He found the bag with an oversized red L on it, quickly opening it to a bundle of clothes. Junk. Discarding it, he anxiously dug through the junk. The familiar hilt came into view and he sighed with relief. He pulled the sword out and fastened the sheath to his waist. After scrambling back to the front while fitting his boots, he crawled up onto the platform and glared at the old man sitting next to him. “Listen buddy, I never agreed to this. Turn around immediately or I’ll be forced to make you.”

Reficule shook his head. “Ok buddy, because we all know that worked like a charm last time!”

Leor cringed at his misdirection. “We… I mean I am going west correct?” he wondered out loud.

Reficule smiled. “Yes, of course, you didn’t expect us to go east to Bandit’s Bay. Why that would take us to the end of Ceisoty, the start of the ocean, and around the world!”

Leor smirked sarcastically back. “Well then I’ll see you!” His rebellious ego jumped off the cart. “I’ve found my way before. I can do it again.”

Reficule quickly tugged on the reins. The horses abruptly stopped. “We do not have time for this nonsense. Get on this wagon now!”

“So you can’t go on without me can you? You need my assistance don’t you?” Leor cheekily replied.

“No, I can very well go on without you. It’s just that this area is crawling with coelophysis!”

“What in the underworld are you talking about, coelowhats, you’re insane,”

Leor trampled off the path into the woods. He realized he must be on the west peaks of the series of mountains he knew as Roodly Heights. “When I ran from the town of Yodor, there was no way of trekking this far. Great, now where? Frock my life.” He continued down the mountain, straying further from the path. He heard Reficule yelling something about his destiny. Ignoring the crazy talk, he continued to justify himself. “I don’t care, even though my answer probably would have been yes, that senile, old man had no right in capturing me. I’ve been tossed around enough in my lifetime. I will not put up with it anymore.”

Leor made his way down the hill and thought he heard something rustle in the bushes. Stray squirrel or something, he reasoned. Aggravation pushed aside his survival instincts.

A small creature jumped out of the foliage. It stood about one foot tall and had a small green reptilian body with a crane-like neck stretching out to its head, sniffing the air. The red beady eyes of the creature peered at Leor, while its two short claws stirred. It made several clicking sounds and scampered back into the brush.

“No problem, just a tiny dinosaur,” he muttered and pushed the other direction through the forest beyond the afternoon.

He winced as he scraped his leg on some thorny vine. The thick brush, combined with the twisting rubber trees made this area not so enjoyable to tread through. The waning light faded from behind the trees, it wasn’t long before he scrambled to find some shelter. He kept hiking and hoped to clear the dense brush. His mouth began to feel parched. Instantly regretting not stealing some water from the batty old kook, he tried to focus on finding a spring or something.

The clearing came and the entire tree line stopped. A vast pasture spread out before him. The winding trees of the forest circled around the plain forming a wall. The tall grass swayed in the wind. Fresh valley scents of weeds mingling with flowers whipped passed him. The sky scorched as the sun went down.

“It might not hurt to sleep under the stars tonight. I’ve spent too much time hiding underneath my canopy of leaves,” Leor insisted at the expansive splendor. He knew he had to stay by the wall of trees for protection. No water in view, he thought, but there must be some in the valley. The plain would be too difficult to cross at night. His exposed body was an easy target for any predator. Any dinosaur with sharp teeth and a keen wit. But water needed to be found first thing the next day. No water, no life.

He collected hunks of deadwood, tinder, and patiently started a fire with the friction of some split hardwood. His weary back sloped against the nearest moss covered log. His hands groped for the sheath on his belt and took off his katana. He set it down next to him and unsheathed it to stare at the inscription, mocking him. The Path of Protection. With a look of disdain, he slammed the blade back in its home and set the sheath beside him. The fire crackled and sparked, overtaking the fuel he had strategically placed. His eyelids became heavy. He was soon in an exhausted sleep.

Chapter 2- A Path of the Past

Leor awoke with a jerk and noticed a small dinosaur, like the one the day before, down by his feet. It bit down harshly on his foot.

“Ah, what the?” He pulled his feet back.

The creature clicked and bobbed its head threateningly.

His arm slowly stretched out and picked up the katana next to him.

Three more jumped out of the bushes and hissed.

Leor drew his sword in a flash and cut off the middle one’s head. The miniature reptiles dived at him. He cut them down one by one. Another darted out from a tree in back of him and jumped, biting his leg. He winced as the small razor like teeth sliced him open. The blue blade of his sword quickly flashed, cutting the predator clear in half. Backing into a corner of rocks, he thought back to what Reficule said on the cart. “These must be the Coelothings.”

More swarmed out of the underbrush and surrounded the area. All their beady eyes locked on Leor’s every movement. They rushed in at once, perfectly maneuvered.

Angered, he unleashed one big swing. A rush of light shone from the blade! The blue wave sent the coelophysis sprawling.

The ones that survived limped up and glared at their supposed meal. Looking cheated, they ran back into the brush.

Leor raised the sword in awe, the blade glowing from the strange occurrence. It felt as if part of him entered the katana and shot out at the oversized lizards. He marveled as the sword vibrated slightly and returned to normal. The humming noise ceased and the light dimmed from the blade. The sword scraped against its sheath as Leor put it away. He sat down, leaning against the log by the still glowing embers. “Why did the sword just protect me? I’ve never seen it- oh no-”

A feeling of forgotten regret washed over him.

A memory lodged deep inside his mind tugged hard on his conscience. He tried to fight it. He stared at the sheath and the hidden horror inside. His katana brought great joy of where he came from, but also a realization of what he had become. What he had done. “It was not my fault.” He threw the sword across the dirt. “Frock them, it was never my fault.”

His stomach wretched.

Leor tried to focus on a logical explanation for his stomach like breakfast. So he gathered all the dead creatures. He blew the fading coals, adding sticks to make a low, hot cooking fire. Sorrowful emotions could kill, he pondered. So could not getting water. Survival meant focus.

“These things aren’t bad,” he decided, chewing on some blackened meat found on the lean reptiles. “But where to now?” he said quietly, wiping his stubble. The sun had risen shortly before his encounter with the coelophysis. His instinct pointed to the sun. Mid morning, he thought as he studied the sky. Finishing his meal, he kicked dirt on the fire. “I need to get some fluids in me before I faint from lack of water. Lake, stream, anything…” he concluded and grabbed his discarded sword.

Leor looked out on the vast ocean of grass. Its hills like waves searching for a steady rhythm in the wind. He spotted a group of long branching trees on the savannah and started out with hope. “I wonder what happened to crazy Reficule?” he remarked and chuckled, but shook the feeling as he neared the peak of the hill blocking his view of the plains. His strained legs reached the top, revealing the group of trees. “Exactly what I thought. A decently large lake, with its inhabitants.”

Leor crouched and studied the scene. Massive gray dinosaurs with plates of armor and sharp horns rested in the morning sun and drank on one side of the sparkling lake. On the opposite side, there stood yellow and brown blotched creatures with long slender necks. He had never seen such enormous beasts as the ones on the far end. They had long necks as well, but were gigantic and bluish gray.

“These monstrous creatures could easily reach the tops of even the largest oak trees.”

They moved and he could feel the earth stir.

“This world will never cease to impress me.”

Leor trudged down the large hill to find his place in this ecosystem and unclothed, saving his shirt. Then rushed and dove into the water. His mane broke the surface. Refreshed. He spread his arms like a frog to the shore. Scooping up some muddy water, he used a piece of his shirt as a filter and poured the cool liquid down his parched throat.

Looking down, he saw some fish rushing back and forth in a school. School… Images flashed through his mind of the city of Yodor. Bad memories pushed back, swam forward of his so called Ma and Pa and his school. He slapped the water as he complained to his imaginary companion. “Those people I had been given to, like a dog after being found on the side of the street, were despicable. Oh, they made sure I heard the story a thousand times. It was drilled into me by those slave drivers everyone referred to as my caretakers. They sent me to that school of hypocrites. They deserved what happened, what I did…” His voice trailed out, losing its comfort. Blue eyes burned from the old, forgotten emotions, but kept clear as his scarred physique plunged under the water again.

Leor returned to shore and noticed a disturbance in the water near the reeds on his left. He reached land and turned a little to see something shoot out of the brush. Shock paralyzed his nerves.

A huge, thick skinned fiend edged out and glared at him. Its long, dark green body followed by its broad tale locked in place. The vicious head belonged to cold eyes, staring through him. A gaping mouth, only partly opened, revealed razor sharp teeth. The reptile gave a long, drawn out hiss.

Leor inched over to his pile of clothes and his katana. The massive creature darted out quickly to meet him as he snatched up his sword and drew it. He cut the beast across the eyes that concentrated onto the meal before it. Grazed by its teeth, his molars grinded as the blood ran down his leg.

The beast snarled and drew back into its dwelling of reeds, not expecting to be blinded by shocking pain.

Leor wrapped his rough animal skin vest around the wound, applying pressure to stop the bleeding. This wound would be deadly if he couldn’t find his way back to the mountains in the next day or so. He peered around for a sign. There were mountains beyond the pasture, but were they his? The only hope was to keep trekking forward. At least a good shelter would protect him from another attack… maybe.

Clothed and his precious sword returned to its sheath, Leor walked towards the mountainous shadows in the backdrop. His tired legs climbed the mounds of the pasture and continued trekking northeast. Miles passed. The flowing hills of the plain turned into a marshy swampland. He trekked through humid air and damp mud. The afternoon sun disappeared behind web-like trees. He ate left over coelophysis and drank from a water pouch he had made from the rest of his animal hide vest.  The patches of leftover sky turned from bright blue to grayish. A fog settled in as the sun began to set.

Leor’s stomach seized and he flinched with the pain as he kept on hiking. “I should have boiled that drinking water,” he nitpicked, “The middle of a swamp is nowhere to set up camp.”

The discomfort did not stop him though. He continued his hike along the soggy ground. The mountains he searched for were nowhere. His pride had made him lost. But he couldn’t stop.

Shadows seemed to lurk beyond the haze.

Particles of water clung to his lungs. Leor could barely breathe through the thickness of the fog. He couldn’t find one reason for this climate to exist. His weary behind finally retired on a rotting stump. Skeletal trees all around looked down upon him like they wanted to consume the lone traveler. The hanging moss on their limbs loomed like great bearded judges awaiting his defeat.

A crack heard to the right, Leor spun his head to inspect the sound.

Nothing but my exhausted butt, he thought, but another crack sounded to the left. By then it had grown dark. The black shroud of fog made it hard to see into the night. He squinted trying to make out a figure rushing away.

A bite on his neck and then another on his arm.

Leor knew that bite. “Mosquitoes… yet another thing to add to the list of things I hate about swamps. Yodor had a swamp. That damned town. Everyone shunned me as the outsider I was. ‘Born by barbarians’ they used to say. Yodor is full of nothing but the well to do and the well looked after. They deserved it, a jolt to their normal society. Screw them frockers. I did what I did. I’m not sorry.” He looked down at the sword on his belt and sulked again with mixed feelings.

The shadowy figure from moments ago reappeared in front of him.

Leor stood and locked eyes with the ferocious dinosaur treading out of the fog. Its dual clawed feet sunk into the ground. One of the middle claws perked up with every step as it moved closer. It wasn’t much bigger than him, but looked far fiercer. Its serpent like tail whipped back and forth as the grey feather covered body swayed. Keeping its narrow head completely steady, it let out a terrifying screech. The nostrils of the creature inhaled heavily. It clicked its mouth full of pointed teeth. Its small arms couldn’t do much damage with three twitching claws each. But he focused on the terrifying jaws and talons.

Leor drew his katana slowly as he whispered in frustration, “Raptor,” and waited for the monster to attack.

Suddenly the feathers stood up on the back of its neck and it lunged forward.

Leor ducked, evading the clap of the sharp teeth snapping at his exposed head and turned the sword inward, thrusting into the creature’s chest.

The monster screamed and fell limp on top of Leor.

He quickly grabbed a handful of the wispy feathers and threw the creature off.

Another horrifying fiend darted out of the darkness toward him from the right. More raptors lunged from his left.

He bent down, slicing through a monsters tough, armor like legs.

It didn’t stop the beast. Sharp teeth dug into Leor’s left shoulder.

He grimaced and stabbed the ferocious reptile in the throat.

They came in a premeditated attack from all sides.

Leor glanced around, semi-blinded by pain. No! He had to focus: two on his right, one on his left.

They charged in and he released anger into the vibrating blade. It began to glow bright and shone like a star among the murky scene! Leor felt the blue rays of light cut into the raptors and force them to retreat. His emotion continued pouring out into his weapon!

His right thigh exploded in pain. The phenomenon ended and the glow vanished.

Leor swung the blue katana backwards into the body of another one of the creatures biting into his leg. It had snuck up behind him!

The monster locked down harder into his muscle and hissed.

Leor screamed harshly and pulled out the blade. He put all his force into one clear slash, cutting through the raptor’s neck and severing the head.

With adrenaline coursing through his veins, Leor ripped the monster’s head off his thigh. The blood poured out. He felt the darkness thicken and death creeping slowly on him.

So he ran.

He didn’t know why, but something told his legs to keep stretching out in front of the other. The pain overtook his body as he rushed through the haze. Chills and pulses shot up his leg as he ran, each step with the right felt like one more chomp by the raptors teeth.

Thick fog, swampland, but nothing more. A chill crept through his spine, longing for defeat, but his demise raced behind him as the humid air weighed down his lungs. About to give way to the darkness, a massive white stone wall loomed in front of him. Black circles shrouded his vision, but he made out a grey robed, hooded person standing by a wooden door in the huge wall.

The black braids of the female monk fell lightly on her shoulders. Her pale face showed surprise as she pulled back her hood. She dropped a brown bottle in shock as the beaten traveler limped forward mouthing, “Help… me.”

Leor felt his feet get stuck in the swampy mud. His defeat gripped him, but his stubbornness wouldn’t let him die in a swamp. He collapsed with a final lunge forward.

The grey robed women grabbed his arms to lift him, but another raptor darted out from the marsh. Sparkling blue light shot from her hands and downed the ferocious reptile in an electric wave.

Leor watched in awe.

The beast twitched as it steamed.

A welcome smile spread her kind face. “Let’s get you fixed up, shall we? Just don’t tell anyone I was drinking rum,” she mumbled, giggling.

He tried to speak, but fainted into darkness.


I’m starting a new short story series called Culture War… and this is the first installment. Enjoy! (C)

This was the moment the audience had been waiting for. The humans sat in the movie theater, their longing for rescue thumped steadily in their hearts. Suddenly the longing turned to bloodlust. The cinema screen flickered so the lights pulled at their emotion.

The heroic actor struck the villain. His faith in humanity lingered. This was the most dangerous feeling he had ever felt. The white screen hung over the villain’s chest. Blood splattered, drops speckled in the graphics on the cloth. If this was real, the theater would never rid the stench of death.

The hero’s military KABAR blade had entered into villainous actor’s stomach and triumphant music blasted through the high definition speakers. He raised his malicious hazel eyes and glared at the hero’s success. He felt the human’s longing for violence. He grew excited by their thirst, but his performance on screen hid his bliss through his character’s gruesome death.

The hero stared at the villain with distain, but only the purest anger. The villain was done. Everyone knew it. This is the part in the film everyone suspected. Usually they would desire retribution and justice. But this was the new horror genre.

These fans craved only gore.

The cinema clicked as the reel changed. The hero pulled out the knife. Guts and entrails fell out of the villain’s body. He should have never accepted this acting job. The special effects team was all on the road to hell. The audience’s veins boiled with satisfaction. He knew this movie had lost the human’s souls more than saved them. He had failed for the first time in thirty years of filmmaking.

The villain fell dead in a puddle of blood. The humans fueled his deadly grasp on their emotions. His anticipation broke through with glee. The demon crawled from the movie screen and flew about the audience in triumph. He had caused the mighty Eli Steward to fail. His undetectable dance made some of the more outgoing humans clap and cheer. Their emotions had been won by the demon. The shadowy figure invisibly kissed some of their heads as he coasted over their lost souls.

The hero turned to the screen in panic. His face stretched across the canvas with terror. This wasn’t in my contract, Eli Steward thought. The FX team must have edited it. He was only the actor after all. The hero was faced with his own demise and met it with an explosion of visceral flesh and bloody excretion.

The audience loved it. It was as if the carnage poured out of the screen.

The demon rejoiced. He swam through the reactions that were thick with hateful desire.

Eli calmly stepped out of the film screen. All the jeering looks couldn’t see him. His green eyes watched the demon prance around like a shadowy fool above. His tan jacket was unzipped, revealing a yellow shirt. But the pants and shoes he wore were a faded grey that matched his short-cut pepper hair the human females loved so much. His breath filled the air with a sweet perfume that scattered the hanging odor of malice. He couldn’t do this for every theater that the film was being displayed through, but he could try and win some of these misled souls. The angel walked over to a younger teenager.

The teen’s friends were laughing as the credits rolled. The girl he liked nudged him with pleasure. Her sinful palate wetted.

Eli looked directly into the kid’s eyes. They revealed the uncomfortable feelings flooding his mind. He took his manicured hand and held it to his noggin.

A slow feeling of regret poured through the young man’s thoughts. His parents had taught him better than this. But he could make this girl his girlfriend tonight. So much for morals. “Hey guys, let’s go out and get some beer. I know a great place that sells underage.”

Eli watched the teen’s friends praise him like the hero he had played on screen. The girl tugged the boy’s arm close to her chest. They exited with the disturbing crowd. Disturbingly pleased. God’s heart cried for them. Tears wet Eli’s cheeks. The angel failed. He got too close to worldly things. This movie would hit the top charts like all of his films. Souls pried closer into Lucifer’s hands.

The demon finished his celebration and drifted to the top of the theater’s ruby red chairs. As he comfortingly sat, his dark form took shape. This demon was known to the humans as Curtis Craig. His black suit sleeked into view. His dim blond hair parted from right to left. His hazel eyes made everyone believe his lies. His thin maroon tie ran down his white button down shirt like a river of dried blood. His smile showed the most through his perfect brown stubble. Daring and dashing had been created for actors like Curtis Craig.

Eli looked up to the creature of death. “I suppose you are more than happy with yourself.”

Curtis slowly clapped as their names crossed the credits. “I just don’t think it could have got any better. The visceral feel was… magnificent.”

“Deception won you this box office. But I propose an emotion duel.”

The demon’s eyes flickered in the cinematic light as the last of the audience exited. His smile of delight had disappeared. The cautionary look of smugness now looked down at the angel.

“C’mon, are you scared of me? You tricked the producer of one of my action films into creating a horror flick. This was supposed to be a story of valor in the face of evil. Instead, it is a show of raging violence. What happened to the demon entertainment guild’s cooperation? They like your horror and filth, but big movies you used to never mess with-”

“I’ll do it.”

Eli Steward’s lips now curved into a smile. It wasn’t the crafty smirk of satisfaction, but the warm grin of redemption. “It will cover the western world, agreed?”

“If I can win the rights, I can when the emotions.”

“We will see.”

“And so will America. Despite the outcome of this duel, they will all see the first truly dark movie of Eli Steward. Images forever locked in memory.”

These words charged Eli’s fury. His righteous anger rushed throughout the theater and the film that had just played, melted on its roll. The black screen of credits broke with white circles of light as the combustion raged and it was left shining blank.

Curtis floated upward in his neat suit. “Naughty, naughty. Good thing they have extra reels.” His body tore through the clothing as his true form came forth. Black webbed wings reached out of his shadowy back. His hazel eyes lit bright yellow. Talons grew from his bony limbs. His face elongated like a horse and his dark blonde mane entangled down his back. Rams horns sprouted last. His gangling legs gripped the plush theater seats. “Let’s go then,” his raspy voice let out.

“I’m waiting,” Eli calmly replied.

The demon charged downward.

Light blasted where they collided. The angel shone in all his glory as his yellow skin wrapped his body. The strength of his hands interwove with the demon’s claws. His green eyes glowed bright and his hair had been burned away. His massive white wings exploded from his shoulders in a burst of feathers. They took up most of the cinema screen which began to flicker. His physique contracted and launched them back into the fluttering movie fabric.

America would now feel their battle.

They tore out of another version of the film across the country. The invisible conflict made the audience jump. Blow for blow, they pummeled each other. The two peeled off from fighting and faced off in the dark theater. The half the demon covered cackled and jeered at the violence of the movie. The half the angel protected wept and covered their eyes from the gruesome show. Some were prone to numbness. The supernatural brawl continued as they leapt through the air.

They jumped from viewing room to viewing room. Through the walls. Every time a punch landed the humans either yearned for hate or laughed in joy. The balance of emotions tugged by the war for culture.

Curtis double kicked Eli.

He spread his wings and steadied in midair.

The demon stretched his claws forward. His fangs spread in wanting.

The angel grasped around the black arms and plunged into the screen of a western film. The last shot by the smoking gun made people smile at the satisfaction when good always used to triumph over evil. Now the grey shroud of acceptance hung in most of their hearts. Lawlessness ruled by political correction. The angels were losing.

They kept popping in and out of cinema screens. Humans across the country were affected by the battle for their emotions. They showed in an old southern town. Ripping and roaring above the onlookers watching a gruesome scene in their movie.

Eli kneed the demon in his ridged jaw.

Curtis dug his long nails into the angel’s ribs. They swung backwards as Eli wrapped him in a hold under his belly.

Eli squeezed as hard as he could. The rich smell of sulfur and disease leaked out of the demon’s pores. The black stretched membrane struggled to be free. The audience watching his film began to rise and leave. One by one they trickled out the theater, disgusted by the perversion of violence. Hope peaked in his mind.

Curtis broke free and batted his monstrous wings into the body of the angel.

They intertwined once more and plunged deep into the world of cinema.

They burst out in a New York City theater. The shock almost blinded Eli.

Curtis basked in the true melting pot of freedom. The critics all sat in their seats watching with emotions strained. They should have had notepads to report on their findings. Art and entertainment paired as the study of their verdicts.

Eli was chased out of the showroom by Curtis. The demon caught his speed and clasped talons around his throat. Lunging to the ground, he coughed up radiance.

The duo struggled in silence as the unaware humans walked leisurely by in the theater lobby. More of them changed their movie decision that night to go see the film of gore. Old and young turned in different tickets to the gentleman at the stand, but walked directly into the movie that starred the two secret actors. This was the reality of the secret life of high class celebrities. This was the true culture war. Demon Entertainment versus Angel Enterprises.

Eli pried the claws off him. They encircled the lobby.

“You see. This place is lost to you. Lucifer has free reign here,” Curtis shouted.

“The fight is never over. We will regain the western world,” Eli coughed out.

“You have fun with that. I’m going to go enjoy the illustrious pleasures of this world.”

“We will plan. We will rescue. And the angels will come out victorious,” Eli spouted, not believing his own words. This world was being dragged under. Closer and closer to the pit of darkness. Death reigned these lands, and everyone here couldn’t stop smiling about it. The most dangerous threat dressed up in satisfaction.

“See ya on the red carpet,” Curtis Craig mocked. He twirled in smoke and spark. Then he vanished.

Eli Steward stood like a titan amongst all the lost souls going to their movies. His green eyes filled with sorrow. He had to meet with all the Arch Entertainers. White wings shot upwards in a flash of all encompassing light.

The balance was returned to normal as the lower spirits crept out from all the dark corners. The regular inhabitants of the spiritual world couldn’t join humanity like the supernatural celebrities. But they whispered in ears their promises. Demons louder than angels.


Another short story! Enjoy and I’m in the process of making my online presence hopefully a bit more known and looking into the creation of a .com. Thanks to all who read and I’m always elated to talk to anyone about writing… (C)

Murder’s Judgment

Patrick Fox

“Kill him,” she said.

“But my queen,” he replied, “I just don’t-”

“Quiet,” the queen interrupted, “You will kill him before he kills me.”

“Very well,” he answered. That was all he ever did. Answer.

The royal eyes fluttered, but not beautifully. They scourged for a single shred of doubt on her servant’s face. “Now, please.”

“Yes my queen,” he bowed slightly and reversed. He walked carefully away, to not give away his true thoughts. These things were madness. The drama of the high court was in complete disarray. To kill a judge meant certain death, but could he pull it off? This single judge was the only one that would convict the queen. The only one that would convict him. All others would turn away. This comforting thought lingered as he walked out of the ornate holding room and collided into the person of dread.

Books spilled across the floor. The judge glared to the servant in annoyance. “Well? Are you going to help me?”

He watched the man begin to pick up his volumes of law. The law to convict his queen. If the term wracking the nerves held any weight, this was it. He quickly stumbled to help.

A letter opener slipped out of papers the judge fumbled through.

The servant’s steady hands outstretched toward the gleaming blade. Contact with a weapon. They shook as the shiny point rose.

The judge grabbed it away. “Go attend your queen; she will need to enjoy her last few hours of freedom.”

“Yes your honor,” is all he could manage. He watched the unsuspecting prey leave with arms full of nonsense. Humanity’s Law: Nonsense. The real law was made by God. That was what he had been raised to believe anyway. Was the queen’s law the same as God’s law? The oak door slammed shut at the end of the hallway. The judge was in his chambers, deliberating. Alone.

Empty knight armor lined the hall, all silently watching the tortured servant. He wondered if any men had killed in the armor or were they made to just witness one death. The judge’s death. Swords rested in each of the motionless gauntlets. One could shed blood. He timidly stepped to one of them. Hands gripped the hilt and pulled.

It didn’t budge.

He put more weight into it.

Nothing.

His legs stretched, feet planted, and he gave a mighty tug.

Metal scraped as the blade came loose. The sound echoed down the empty marble hall.

Committed.

He hefted the bulky object and trudged toward the door at the end of the hallway. This was the last few moments of his innocence trickling away. Soon I could be a killer, he thought, a label to never come off. He was now only a few steps from the door.

A noise echoed in the stairway to his right. The footsteps were growing louder.

Panic gripped his body. It jerked him left and right. Wind whistled through an open window to his left. He hurled the sword out the stone hole. Clangs were heard as the blade struck the sides of the castle below.

The bishop appeared from the flights of steps. He watched the servant come to attention. “Stand easy young man. Come help me. The judge has asked for my council.”

He collected the books and writings from the bishop’s hands. This was God’s law. This was true law.

The cleric steadily opened the judge’s door and motioned for him to follow.

He watched the robed man disappear and rushed to the window. Fear rang his panic as he peered over the ledge. The sword lay below, but guards studied it. As if waiting for him, they raised their heads. His body jerked away, true law spilling onto the ground. Did they see him?

The bishop peeked out from the office. “What are you doing? Pick up those and come here.”

His back arched down like the castle rested upon it. He retrieved the documents and stepped cautiously into the judge’s chamber.

“Oh, it’s him,” the judge sputtered, “no wonder your papers were dropped. So as I was saying, the queen obviously killed her.”

He set the documents down on the thick wood desk. Of course the queen had killed her. She slept with the king.

The bishop sat in the chair across from the judge. “Just because she was an adulteress, doesn’t make her a murder victim. She could have committed the sin of suicide. She was a practiced sinner after all.”

The judge frowned and looked to the servant. “I should ask you to leave, but you may be more use to me than him.” He motioned to the bishop.

The servant frowned at this, but straightened his countenance when remembering his place. He should have killed him with this blasphemy. But this judge was a Lutheran, only allowed by the king. Blasphemy was to be expected. “No your honor, I cannot say-”

“Oh stop, you can say. You will say. In front of your God.” The judge motioned to the bishop once again.

The bishop objected, but was silenced by the shushing of the questioner.

The servant was torn. His duty to answer by order of the judge and his duty to kill by order of the queen. One would be cancelled by the other he supposed. “I- well-” The bishop would tell of his betrayal. “The queen never-” He would be protected by the judge’s murder. “The queen could have.” The words came out easily.

The bishop stood, smacking his face. “I have never! Treason to his master!”

The judge chuckled. “I thought as much. You will be rewarded greatly in service to the king. Lay off him holy man. Go report to the king’s servants, tell him I sent you.”

He wavered like a tree about to topple. Protection from the queen? Certain death if she were to be acquitted. The judge seemed set though. Set to die.

The judge stared at the servant with impatience.

The bishop couldn’t let it end like this. “Your honor, he is but a servant. He cannot-”

“He is not. I am but a judge and I will do just that… you leave as well. Useless ambassador of religion.”

The offended bishop looked to the nervous servant and back to the stern judge. Then he traipsed out in a fit of fury.

The servant flinched as the door slammed. Now he was with the judge. Alone. No doubt the bishop would never tell of his betrayal. His holy presence would be enough to convict the church in the queen’s death. Conviction. The church agreed with the queen. The church convicted the judge. The judge must die.

“Well man, what are you waiting for? You can slam the door too if you want,” the judge was surprisingly calm. He moved some law filled papers out of the way, revealing the shining letter opener.

The servant lunged forward and grasped the small dagger. The dagger of useless law. He crawled over the desk, papers strewn about. Papers holding the law of man. His purpose was the purpose of God. He clutched the judge’s neck and clambered on top of his thick robe.

Time froze. The servant breathed sporadically. The judge’s lungs had filled with air, but they gently let it out. Calm. Collected. His voice spoke with a certain reverence, “Therefore all things whatsoever ye would that men should do to you, do ye even so to them: for this is the law and the prophets.”

The servant felt the pulse of the large vein on the neck. The judge had spoken law. God’s law. But his commitment was too true. The point of the letter opener pressed upon the stream of life that steadily raced with each throb.

The judge continued his steady vigil. “Ye have heard that it hath been said, thou shalt love thy neighbor and hate thine enemy. But I say unto you, love your enemies, bless them that curse you, do good to them that hate you, and pray for them which despitefully use you, and persecute you.”

Damn this betrayer of the law! The servant thought. He speaks truth and righteousness, but he is about to sentence one to death! The judge’s blood trickled down and touched his hand. This blood was his life.

The judge carefully closed his eyes and let out one more long line of law. “Think not that I come to destroy the law, or the prophets: I am not come to destroy, but to fulfill. For verily I say unto you, till heaven and earth pass, one jot or one tittle shall in no wise pass from the law, till all be fulfilled. Whosoever therefore shall break one of these least commandments, and shall teach men so, he shall be called the least in the kingdom of heaven: but whosoever shall do and teach them, the same shall be called great in the kingdom of heaven.”

The tension cracked. The sharp point lifted.

The servant crept off the judge’s lap. He had been wrong. His death would not serve God’s law, but man’s law. Man’s law dressed up in a robe and called God. He had been wrong about everything. The servant knew this would cost him his life. The letter opener crashed to the ground.

The judge calmly pulled out a handkerchief and wiped at the line of blood on his neck. His kind eyes scanned the shuttering servant. He cleared his throat. “Now as I said before. Go report to the king.”

Tears flooded the servants face. “Yes your honor. I apolog-”

The judge interrupted with the raising of the white cloth spotted with blood. “No laws were broken here. Go with God young man.”

The servant filled with wrenching emotion. Regret and sorrow tugged his chest forward in a bow. As he turned in humbleness, the voice of compassion spoke out once more behind him.

“Take this and wipe your face before you go.”

He turned back and his quivering hand took the handkerchief. He rubbed it to his face. The white cloth dampened with his sweat and tears. Sweat, tears, and blood. He gathered the wrenching passion and stored it deep in his heart.

The judge smiled and nodded.

The servant bowed once more and, with respect, turned and opened the oak door.

Three guards awaited him outside the chamber as the door closed. They raised their javelins to his throat. “You are being arrested for the murder of the judge,” the tallest one said.

He saw the queen glaring with glee at his sorrowful expression. She knew that he would die for her. For the church. For God. But he had found a different God in that chamber. The judge’s God.

The door opened once again. The judge steadily came out grasping his books of law. God’s laws. He glared at the soldier’s spears with disgrace. “What are you doing?”

The armored guards looked to each other in confusion. “Nothing your honor,” the tall one replied. They raised their weapons and stepped away.

“Good, then lead your queen into the courtroom. I have finished my deliberation,” the judge concluded.

The servant stared at the queen. Her face of satisfaction turned well beyond horrified. Her steady eyes frantically searched for help. Her bottom lip quivered with fear. The scent of her perfume even turned into sulfur. She was gently led into the tense high court.

The judge turned to him and winked. Then he peacefully strutted forward. The last of his thick robe disappeared into the courtroom. The twin oak doors closed with a resounding thud in the empty hallway.

The servant stood firm. His mind numbed. Peace had overwhelmed him. The peace of God, not of the church, but of deserving force surrounded his soul. He serenely stepped into the stairway and upwards to the king’s wing of the castle. His service to the queen was complete. The high court would be judged. The kingdom would be judged. He had already been judged. He was found innocent even though full of corruption. A judgment that left him forever changed.


One of my favorite things to write is fights. Here is a excerpt from the Path of a Guardian in which Leor fights a giant serpent-like Kraken from a pirate ship called the Skull. He now has discovered to use the power of spirit, a holy energy that works as light sent to damage an enemy. All Works Copyrighted.

They watched the dark water while ripples appeared and disappeared. Leor scratched the dirty blonde hair on his chin as he saw something to the right.

Bubbles started to pop on the surface and the dark water started to swell. The bubbles got fiercer and the waves got bigger, rocking the ship.

Frea gave a worried look to Leor. “Hope you’re ready for this. Watch her claws, she will drag you under.”

The water split and a black kraken as big as the ship ripped out of the water. Her mouth, filled with sharp teeth, opened and let out a screech shaking Leor to the bone. The beast’s glowing red eyes peered down at the ship, and its fins extended out like spears with sharp spines on the end of them. The kraken mother stretched her smaller arms out while she glared at the ship that killed so many of her children. The giant reptile lurched down, launched herself out of the dark sea, and crossed over the ship diving onto the other side. Her black scaled body, with many sets of fins, seemed to last forever as it followed its path like a bridge ending at the other side of the Skull.

Leor darted to the middle of the ship and held his sword low, and it started to glow. The katana lit up the area, while the monks launched blasts of spirit up into the armor like scales of the kraken. The guardian saw its massive tail protrude and knew he had to strike.

Leor ran up a mast of the ship and launched himself high upwards, unleashing a mighty spirit slice into the air towards the end of the beast. The spirit tore through the scales and severed the tail, as the rest rushed into the sea quivering. The mighty, double winged tail landed on the deck and splintered the old wood, dark red blood seeping out.  The guardian floated lightly back down as the pirates stood, mouths agape in awe. He reached the deck and grasped his shoulder in pain, for it hadn’t fully recovered yet.

The water burst as the mother kraken screamed in fury and erupted in front of the ship.

Leor cringed and started to run towards the beast. Reaching the tip of the Skull, he pointed his blazing blade at her and unleashed a powerful blue beam.

She dodged. The fierce beast lunged forward but got disrupted by another beam contacting her neck. The kraken bobbed and weaved, screeching in anger.

Leor’s blue eyes fixed to the beast and concentrated on every move she made.

Her red eyes burned through the night as she intently watched him as well. The warrior stood strong, sword sparkling, and waited for her to make a move. The fiend slithered through the water slowly and came close to open her gaping mouth, hissing as a foul stench and sea spray rushed forward at the guardian.

Leor took the opportunity and swung, unleashing a slicing spirit attack towards her throat.

The kraken darted left, missing the sharp edge of the blast, then charged forward and grasped Leor with her short arms. The claws clenched the guardian as she plunged into the water.

Leor sunk into the water, flinching in pain, but he focused. No wasted seconds, I could drown. He grasped his katana, straining his mind past the pain. He managed to stab the chest of the beast. Letting out as much spirit as he could muster into the blade, the kraken released him, and he heard the screeching through the depths of the dark water. Leor slashed at the two arms reaching for him, eyes burning from the salt. He heard more shrieking through the watery tomb as he swam upward towards the faint light of the moon. Who knows how far I am from the surface. The guardian ran out of air as he desperately reached toward the distant light. Leor started to black out and launched himself upward using the last bit of his spirit.


Here’s a little something I wrote while bored at work over lunch. Interesting idea brought on by a creative strike… (C)

Impossible Suicide

Patrick Fox

“911, where is your emergency?”

The phone line paused. “I’m calling to report a suicide.”

The female dispatcher started to type. “Can I get an address? Who is the victim?”

The steady male voice remained calm. “Lucifer.”

The dispatcher kept rapping on the keyboard. “Do you know the victims last name?”

The smooth voice chuckled quietly. “I have no last name. I am Lucifer the fallen angel. The damned, the cast aside, the one called devil.”

Her busy hands paused. “Sir, this is a recorded line, and your prank is being traced. This is a crime you can be charged with.”

The voice sighed with aggravation. “You filthy bag of flesh, how can the One so holy be enthralled with such a soul blinded by its own ignorance?”

The dispatcher started typing again. “Sir, what address can you be located at? We will send out a unit to help you. Don’t do anything you would regret. Do you have any family who can help the situation?”

As the dispatcher leaned over to issue a 10-96 call to police units, the voice kept speaking with a tinge of bitterness. “I had a family… I had a Father. He left me to die, this is His fault. As for the address, well, on this pathetic piece of rock, sand, and water.”

She released her mute button. “Are you at the beach Lucifer?”

The voice chuckled again. “You beings can be hysterical sometimes. I can’t commit suicide imbecile, I’m the devil.”

“That’s good to hear, just wait for help. If you can tell me your exact location, I can send someone to talk in person.” She replied with concern.

Still calm, the voice spoke. “Neither you nor anyone sent can help me. I’m stuck in limbo, forever cast aside by something you will never understand. When people are dead, rejected, and thrown at my feet, I have nothing else to do but torture them for the chance they got. The chance I never received. You have the capability to be in His presence, to worship our Father forever, and most of you throw it away…. All you have to do is believe, an act of faith, and you are forgiven for every heinous crime you have ever committed-”

The dispatcher’s voice cut him off as she disregarded protocol. “I know sir. I am a Christian and believe. Do you believe in God’s love and Jesus? Faith can help you from what you’re feeling now.”

The voice sighed once more. “I know Cindy. You get the free pass. You simply believe that He sent His Son to die for all your wrongdoings. Not us, none to help an angel who commits a sin. As a servant to his Father, I deserve better than you, but His creation is marveled much more. We are made with faith; shouldn’t that make us more advanced?”

Her voice quivered. “How do you know my name sir?”

The voice became angry. “Haven’t you been listening Cindy? Isn’t that your meaningless job? I call you with my emergency, and you send help. The police, a pride of your easy society! The reason for my call is to reassure myself you cannot help me. Your very existence is to mock that I am here! This call will be reviewed, people will call it weird and coincidental, and then it will be buried. None of you get it, none of you listen. It’s so easy to fool you into believing you are greater than God. The ultimate betrayal and the first sin. Every person on this earth is guilty of it, even you Cindy, and you’re about to receive His great promise.”

The dispatcher spoke quietly while holding her shoulder. “What do you mean, about to receive His great promise?”

The voice kept speaking. “It’s so unfair, in moments you will see God’s great glory, and be connected to His love forever after living a life of sin. You have done horrible things, but never got caught by this legal system you work for. You tell yourself you’re forgiven for all those things, and you have lived a full life with plenty of blessings. Everyday you commit crimes against the One who is most holy, but you were forgiven. Today I wish I could commit suicide, and go to be with Him again. Be held by my Father, and told I am loved. But I cannot, it is impossible. I hate God for that, and I hate you for that. Why don’t more people try harder to live by His plan for their lives? You’ve tried, but not nearly enough for my liking. None of you will ever try hard enough. Enjoy your free blessings…”

The recording stopped, and the two men stared at each other through the uncomfortable silence. The man in a black suit broke the stiff air. “So that is the last thing heard before Cindy had her heart attack?”

The police officer answered him. “Yes, after the line disconnected, our dispatcher had her attack sir.”

The man in the black suit nodded. “Alright, did you get the phone line history?”

“No, that’s another weird thing. There was no phone number listed, it’s like she never received the call.”

The other man nodded again. “Hmm, well that’s all I need, looks like this case is closed.”

The officer gave a puzzled look. “What? Case is closed?” The man in the black suit looked at him candidly.

“Yup, there are no leads but a strange recording with no details. I’m sorry for your station’s loss, but this case is closed. And don’t let this audio file slip to the media; it’ll look bad on the city’s rep.”

“Ok, I mean, yes sir. Have a good day.”

The man put on black sunglasses. “Have a good one Joe.”

The officer squinted as he watched the man exit the station, and thought to himself. I called myself Sgt. Stevens, I wonder how he knew my first name. No matter, this is less paperwork I have to deal with. Then the police officer went about his business.

The first two chapters are mainly about Leor and the world around him (conflict interlaced of course). The bulk and importance of the story doesn’t hit until the third chapter, so here is a little writing trailer:

Leor has survived in the wild the last four years, running from his past and his dead culture. Forced to leave his secluded cabin, thrown back into the world, he wants to find a purpose for himself. After near death, he runs into the city of Licarme and its monastery of the Spirit. This diety makes up all things and gives a powerful energy to those who can wield it. Vejoha, the lead monk, knows more about the survivor than himself however, and reveals to him the fragile state of this continent known as Ceisoty. A civil war tears the country apart, but lately it seems like a massacre of the Southland by the tyrant Marius. Fueled by the memories of the tyrant destroying his people, Leor heads up a group of monks to the front lines of the war. Braving a town of pirates, sailing across a deadly sea, and fighting in this war will prove to be the easy part. He can’t see a reason for the faith behind the monks beliefs, and knows that this Spirit has done nothing for his hard life. Love comforts him, but vengeance pushes him over the edge. Can Leor find the truth in the darkness? Beat and broken, he learns this war reaches far beyond the physical realm, and in the supernatural world lies his repentance.

Patrick Fox… Just another breakout writer trying to get his pieces out! Thanks to everyone that will follow my journey, and hopefully it will expand to become a great thing.

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